by Tiny Reader Oct 13, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Cause I can't stand to see you leave, |
I really like this theme your dealing with, you handle it very well and convey the emotions in a great way. Id just say the structure in a few places are somewhat odd, but it doesnt seem to detract from the poem, if anything it adds to it. Again, very nice work! |
Great poem can totally relate!!! keep writing your excellent |