Time

*This is not finished yet...everyone of my friends who read it thought it was pretty good but i don't know what you think...plz comment and vote for it*

Dazed and confused not knowing what to do,
She laysin bed with a gun to her head,
putting and end to the pain,
pulling the triger with now shame,
laying there bleeding with a bullet in her head,
still alive yet motion less thinking of the life she once had,
wishing and hoping it wasn't that bad....

To be continued...............