The writer

by Ele   Oct 13, 2005


I tried to write a poem with all this hidden meaning,
But it just wouldn't flow whilst I was thinking.
So I'm just writing like I usually do.
It may not be great, but it suits me, if not you.

I tried to include long words,
But it didn't sound like me,
So I crossed them out and replaced them
With words that come easily.

You may not think it is clever
To write something simple in every line.
But this is me that's writing,
And it suits me just fine.

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  • 18 years ago

    by locky

    I don't no what your complaining about because that was a great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Zack O.o

    Simplicity is best,your real self should be displayed in your poetry

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Wow. This to me is an exmaple of real poetry. Expressing true thought and feeling, in whatever way is best and whatever way expresses YOU the most.

    I love it, this poem is amazing. Most people, myself included, try to 'sound' a certain way because that's what they think poetry is, but it's what you want it to be.

    Great job and keep it up!

    Take Care and God Bless,
    Sarah-Joy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    Hey, really nice poem, I like its simpleness! It's just straightforward and to the point, a refreshing read :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Yeah, very nice. And very understandable.

    Good Writing!
    beth

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