Comments : Some days

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    I agree with her, that my favorite lines were the last two. They were great and a nice way to end this poem. Good job! And keep up the great work!
    Love always,
    ~BJ~

  • 19 years ago

    by amelia

    This is a good one
    love
    amy

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I love the feel of it. With a sporadic, random scheme that ends up strangely flowing.