I still love you...

by muncheez   Oct 13, 2005


I gave up almost everything I had for you,
Yet all you ever did was make me blue.
You said you loved me too,
But in the end, I see it wasnâ??t true.
I gave you my innocence and my dreams,
Just so that in the end Iâ??d cry full running streams.
I donâ??t know how you did to forget me,
But now I wish youâ??d pass on the secret.
But even after all the pain,
I think thereâ??s a lesson to gain.
But the thing is, babe,
Iâ??m still trying to figure out what it is.

Dedicated to S. Fernandez
I love you- I always willâ?¦.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Lydia O

    I didn't rate this poem because it needs some editing to remove all the special characters that don't belong here.

    But I think this has the potential to be a very good poem. It is a well written expression of your feelings. It also has a pleasing rhyme scheme, but the flow could be improved. I'll check back later to see if you have made the necessary fixes.