The house of dust

Please read it..this poem means so much to me cause its really about me and how i grew up.so it would be great with some comments.

In my past I remember the house of dust
and the girl with a family and everything she lost
the mum wasnt who she wanted to be
thats why the girl was meant to see
all the pain and suffering that lays underneath
I could tell you the story, just take a seat.

It all began with a little fight
that made the future of a girl go out of sight
the darkness came and everything was torn
she asked herself why she even was born?
she got depressed and cut herself up
its going to hell now cause she cant stop
her mum is mad and calling her names
shes doing her best and its all complains
she is tired now and its all to much
you could see it in her eyes and its hard to watch
many tried to help but she still cries
her mum doesnt care cause she sticks with those lies.
the only thing that lights up her life
its that pain which appear with the cut of the knife

her life is gone and so are her friends
its all full of lies and people that pretends
to be there for her when shes having a bad day
if this aint stopping she can not stay
if this is life what bad has she done
to deserve this life and forever run

her dad wasnt around cause he didnt dare
to keep up fighting and show her that he care
he moved away when she was ten
every time shes sad it plays again
she was hurt for life but shed always stay strong
she began to realise her feelings were gone
she went cold and wouldnt talk
when somebody tries she'll still just walk
the problems at the house became worse
you could feel it in the air it was like a curse
her brother understood but he had problems of his own
she didnt get a choice she must make it all alone
this is what happens when all love goes away
its hard to survive and impossible to stay

she tried her best to replace lost love
and then he came sent from above
he became here saviour, her escape from it all
but when he came too close she built up a wall
so no one could be to close to her heart
cause she realised she been hurt from the start
her brother couldnt take it, he saw the solution
thought about hes life and found the conclusion
that drugs were the answer to all this pain
the next two years was so in vain
they both grew a hatered to their mum for all this
a family to love they surely miss
but in the end everything will be good
so they can live their lives in happiness the way they should.