I like it. i think that is really good.

THis is a good poem your a very good writter for just being 13. Keep up the good work and dont just use poetry as a past time you have talent.
much love
amanda
God bless you!!

Oh and i forgot to say, i can relate to this poem right now. I dont know!! I know I can trust you, but I like this boy and he seems to be scared to let people know how he feels cuz he got hurt with one of his exs and im pretty sure he still has feelings for her. My friend told me that he still has feelings for me too but he is confused and we went out but we decided to jus t be friends and I miss him. oh and sorry that i am teeling you all this its just how i feel and i dont know can you write a poem about that i want to see how it'll sound. well got to go write back.

Wow! This is a great poem! Good job!

This sounds like a poem I have heard before, either way, it is really good.

This poem flowed really well and it was very heart warming...great job!

Brooke<3