GASP! Brill hun.

Joins in pure silence with the gasp! it was short but excellent hun! xox

What an excellent depiction of reality! Lovely poem with excellent diction and imagery. Very powerful emotion. Well done.

Great work!!!!!! You painted the picture with your words.

Great use of imagery..

This is an exceptional piece of poetry!

I agree. The imagery and symbolism you've used is absolutely amazing. Short, simple, and incredibly effective.

Thanks for commenting!

Wow...speachless..
i loved it xoxo

That was really good. I enjoyed reading it. You have talent. Keep writing.
Take care

*joins in and gasps* this is an amazing poem!!! absolutely fantastic imagery. you really do have talent. keep writing. xXx

Pretty damn good I must say. 5/5.
Love
Jake P.

Pretty damn good I must say. 5/5.
Love
Jake P.

Excellent work, magnificient!!!

Really good poem, very powerful. god bles * xxx

Awsome poem! 5/5! :)

Amazing!!!! strong amotion and a really unique poem 5/5

Wow its so funy how painters and poets relate they both use different mediums to hide and mask the struggles which they face, and in the end they both come up with a wonderfuly person creation with they can share or keep to themselves. I am very glad that you chose to share your with the rest of us.