Four Sad Words

As varied tears roll down my cheek,
I dare you not to speak!
Those sad words, that make me weak
those four words you said to me…
You weren’t there to see me fall
You couldn’t see my glass shattered heart
When you admitted you never loved me
No one can mend what will never end
Four simple words will tear me limb from limb
As varied tears roll down my cheek

?? make the lines a bit longer soe the flow a bit better, but really you have the wonderful ground work of great poetry you just gott learn how to build it up hun:)

Hope it helps and isnt like *GRR* IM BETTER .. i feel like a jerk for editing a lot of your poems with out being asked:P

Love you tho!
Jenn

What's the four words...is it...i don't love you...tell me k...

Awwwwwwwwwwww that was good...i hope u feel better:)....good poem!