Eloquence Of Love

by ntv650   Oct 13, 2005


Should I find immorality,
In places thought pure of heart,
And might jealousy and hate rule
When good intentions were meant
Or are our messages well received?

For often words are misslaid or lost.
Things said but not truly to be meant.
Albeit they in all things except love.
And untainted love as rare it may be,
Is what hides behind youre deep eyes,-
When I look at you, when you look at me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Tomas,
    there's just something one your poem...if I could just know what.... well, it's a great and beautiful poem, yet so honest and true. I like it lots. Keep it up and hope to read more soon

  • 19 years ago

    by Pilar

    Aaawww i loved it!!! it's so amazingly beautiful, it truly touched me
    i have no more words right now ^^
    5/5 for suree
    take care.

    adios!

    -pili