Give Up

by Momentary Relapse   Oct 13, 2005


"You will not make it in the world
You're worthless and you know it
Just give up you can't win
You're a worthless little 5h!t"

I am stronger than you think
I know I will rise to the challenge
But though I need your support
I can do this on my own
Your loving words I ignore
I can do this on my own

"Face it, life's tough
You won't get very far
Just stop before you get hurt
You'll never be a star"

I have risen once before you
And I know I can do it again
But I wish you would help me
Still I will do this on my own
Your wisdom comes so freely
I will do this on my own

"Take it from me now
You're worthless and won't be anything
Giving up is all you can do
Before you lose everyhing"

*This is not very well done. Blame the short amount of time I had.

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  • 19 years ago

    by love

    Oh man that almost made me cry I feel just like that with my parents....and everytime I try to tell them they make it worst and worst great poem tho....

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Maybe you can edit it...if you think it's not good enough....but to me it's perfect...nice one...and thanks for your comment..i'm not very good in english...so if you ever finds another mistake in my poems...do tell me k

  • 19 years ago

    by Nicholas Kerst

    Pretty good...not one fo your best...but still good...i like the way you said both sides of it...

    --Forgotten--

  • 19 years ago

    by JL

    You're loving words I ignore i think you mean your. but i love the sarcasm. haha. great piece, although its not finished. this sounds lyke my mother. i love the message. stay strong and take care. XXXXX
    JL

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    With work and time this will be a grat piece:) awesome stay stong

    Jenn

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