With work and time this will be a grat piece:) awesome stay stong

Jenn

You're loving words I ignore i think you mean your. but i love the sarcasm. haha. great piece, although its not finished. this sounds lyke my mother. i love the message. stay strong and take care. XXXXX
JL

Pretty good...not one fo your best...but still good...i like the way you said both sides of it...

--Forgotten--

Maybe you can edit it...if you think it's not good enough....but to me it's perfect...nice one...and thanks for your comment..i'm not very good in english...so if you ever finds another mistake in my poems...do tell me k

Oh man that almost made me cry I feel just like that with my parents....and everytime I try to tell them they make it worst and worst great poem tho....