When i look at you

by Angel Cruz   Oct 13, 2005


When I look at you
Your beauty makes me
Feel like I can lift
The world off my shoulders
Your smile can crush
The iron coffin surrounding my heart
The sound of your voice
Gives me the strength
To vanquish the darkness
From my soul & mind
I melt when ever
I look in you eyes
I wish I could stop time
So I could hold you arms
Forever
Every time I see you
You bring life into
This lonely heart of mine
I'm sure you've hear this
A thousand times before
But I'm
Head over heels for you
All of the things you do

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  • 19 years ago

    by Fadedstar

    Hey....that was a really really good poem, soo good:) i Like it alot lol

  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Very nice poem with great meaning... i like the line

    The sound of your voice
    Gives me the strength
    To vanquish the darkness
    From my soul & mind

    .. the one thing that you could change though, is how u put the lines togeather, to make it flow more, like more full sentences, unstead of just cutting off the words, cause it doesnt sound as good that way.. but still. its a good poem~ keep it up and please comment on my poems

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