Comments : When i look at you

  • 19 years ago

    by Falling Up

    Very nice poem with great meaning... i like the line

    The sound of your voice
    Gives me the strength
    To vanquish the darkness
    From my soul & mind

    .. the one thing that you could change though, is how u put the lines togeather, to make it flow more, like more full sentences, unstead of just cutting off the words, cause it doesnt sound as good that way.. but still. its a good poem~ keep it up and please comment on my poems

  • 19 years ago

    by Fadedstar

    Hey....that was a really really good poem, soo good:) i Like it alot lol