I really like this poem! It's kind of all mixed together and hard to follow at some points, but I like the whole meaning of it. And about your friend and her boyfriend..I totally know exactly how it feels!! You're not alone on that one. It's not wrong to feel that way at all. Your friend is just getting caught up in her relationship and is enjoying having someone special in her life. Don't worry about it. Soon she'll realize that boyfriends aren't going to last forever..but friends will. Hang in there and keep writing! Thanks for commenting!

Haley

OMG another scary moment that has happened to me EXACTLY like that
you are really quite good at this
once again a 5 from me

The reason i wrote that one today is because i had a concellor and they gave up on me and made me worse great poem by the way

This poem is cute, i liked it