by TornTears Oct 13, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Life's not so easy when you cry yourself to sleep |
by Joe Holland
Wow, that was awesome! you are brilliant. i can relate to almost all of it. beautiful 5/5 definately |
by Laura Ash
Great poem. 5/5 Keep on writing. It was so sad and I can relate to it. |
by Amanda
OH MY GOSH you poem was fantastic. It really brought tears to my eyes. I can really relate to your poem in so many ways. keep up with the poems mate. :) |
by SuperJenius
Wow i loved it , you're a great writer |
by Falling Up
WOW... i really liked the poem , and how u used the beginning of the poem, to end it... its so true too...so much depth and meaning... you really give me a different perspective on things.... the only thing i have to say is that it has good rhyming, but you could cut down some sentences to make the sentence structure flow more better in your stanzas.. other than that great work and please comment on my poetry too! |