Nice work... i can relate... i've just come out of a phase alot like yours... it will get better... i promise!!
take care, xoxoxo

Wow, amazing, I hope your ok Ash. I want to talk to you on MSN sometime. Amazing poem and keep it up. I hope your ok.

Hmm I can definately relate..
5/5, aside from a few spelling errors it was great! I love all of your writing, I'd love it if you took a look at some of mine

Nice job

I felt your pain...we all have these moments of depression. Some of us just more than others. Great poem...perfect emotional expression 5/5

Wow im sry. great job though 5/5

Sorry but this seemed just like another sad poem....nothing special...no offence....but i'v just read so many that the poem has to be really unique to catch my eye ...plus the flow was a bit off and there were a few mispellings...4/5

Good poem ,really. It should be spelled breaking not braking but o well. a few spelling mistakes but good poem. I liek the last stanza best!

I hope you're okay. I'm always here if you ever need someone to talk to. xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Not one of your best...wow...that's really amazing...this is the first poem I read from you...totally good.

Wow....I feel like that sometimes. i hope everythings ok. But the poem was grt.

Nana

Tear.....tear.......great job though.....tear....another tear.....very heartfelt and very emotional and tearful but thats ok..i still love you even though you made me cry 5/5

I love you poem and it makes me relize that i am not the olny heart broken one out there and i know you dont know me but if you need some one to talk to i be glad just email me

Great poem!!

The content and emotions within this are very good and stronge. theflow was a bit off though

Awe thats beautiful...thats excatly how i feel right now...also thank you for the sweet comment on my poem it means alot to me. you r an amazing writer!

That was very good and very powerful and emotional...I understand how you feel...and I hope ur ok if I could I would take all ur pain away...excellent write 5/5

What a Beautiful poem but sad I can relate I really loved it....and it really touched me when I read it....very emotional poem....you done a wonderful job writing it...I'm so sorry that ur heart is breaking if it helps I'm here for you :) and thank you for the comments they really mean a lot :)

This is well written. You portray the feelings you have very well. It is very sad. Well done. xx

I love it....it makes me cry tho cuz it makes me think of me!!!