Nature's Fire

Oh, wow. This was absolutley outstanding. Probably the best nature poem I've read. I love the ending; the entire poem was so strong and deep.

I love your work! Amazing job, 5/5!

Saiya

I love the last stanza it was so deep and so strong i could almost feel the described sences ...5/5

This is absolutley fabulous. Probably one of the best nature poems I've read. There's no creative critisism I can give you, it was great.

Your imagery is superlative but it seems like you restrict yourself with the size of your lines.

I never really like to read poems about nature, but this...this poem is amazing!

"Dream in ponderous colors
The whispers of our soul
painted strokes of waters
abundant life below"

Nice imagery.=)

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