This was a really good poem. I don't really read too many nature poems, but I really like this. One line I didn't really love was the something about making the whole world whole... maybe you could substitute a different word in for one of the "whole"s so that you don't have two of the same word in the same line so close to eachother. Other than that, it was really good! Awesome job.
~BJ~

This is sooo good. i relly liked it..in fact i like a lot of ur poemz...keep it up...5/5

I never really like to read poems about nature, but this...this poem is amazing!

"Dream in ponderous colors
The whispers of our soul
painted strokes of waters
abundant life below"

Nice imagery.=)

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Your imagery is superlative but it seems like you restrict yourself with the size of your lines.

This is absolutley fabulous. Probably one of the best nature poems I've read. There's no creative critisism I can give you, it was great.

I love the last stanza it was so deep and so strong i could almost feel the described sences ...5/5

Oh, wow. This was absolutley outstanding. Probably the best nature poem I've read. I love the ending; the entire poem was so strong and deep.

I love your work! Amazing job, 5/5!

Saiya