The flow and rhyme was wonderful but sorry the poem was just kinda ununique....nothing very special about it its jsut another sad poem to me maybe i just read way too many sad poems.? 4/5

I love the beggining and i loved the end of this poem very good intro and conclusoin to it the second stanza was my favorite and my least favorite

The razor pulled across my wrist
releasing the flow with it's gentle kiss

that was my favorite part

no one will notice my sudden absence
maybe when I'm gone I'll grant their wish

that was my least favorite part it didn't rhyme or flow

but yeah other then that small mistake great job 5/5

I really can relate to this. Keep up the great writing.

Really good hun. I'm sorry you feel that way but I think we've all felt that way, or at least thought about it.

Great poem u wrote here.. i loved how u put your words together it's so good..5/5 thanks for commenting on my poem.. it meant alot to me.. im gonna check out your other poems.. much love.

Wow, for me that just seemed to flow in a ghost like manor (why i have no idea) i suppose its quite eerie and i like the odd flow pattern. Btw ur already in my favourites...