Untitled-for now

by sandy   Oct 14, 2005


Time after time...minute by minute...second by second ...little by little .....painfully slow....death approaches me...but not in the way that we all think or deam as "normal"?

Cuz my physical being is still walking around...but the one thing that makes me...me.......is slowly leaving me ...hollow...empty and dark....How do you stop your Soul from leaving your body?

Everyday...somebody is taking pieces of it and destroying what makes me beautiful, strong, funny, smart and enjoying life...Why do people take more than I can give?

I guess the price you pay for your kindness,... generosity...patience and understanding is your innerbeing....your "self". Why is the price so high...?

Knowing all I do......Why you ask do I keep giving.....simple...I love people...I care for people...I will sacrifice me for them....Do they care?........they have no clue?

One day, when I go home to my LORD...it will be then that they realize all I have done for them in the name of Love.....as a parent, friend...daughter...sibling...human being....than it will be to late......Will they care then? You tell me!!

This is untitled for now...not really sure its a poem or a way to vent how I feel....any suggestions for title or anything feel free to let me know.....take care!!!

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    I really love what you are saying here.It reminds me of someone I know.Sometimes you can be so self-sacrificing that your life is not your own.It's fine to do for others but it is not selfish to want your own life.As for title suggestions, there's many that come to mind, take a stab at one(or nothing wrong with an untitled piece either)Really good work here.