Empty Eyes

by Iflookscouldkill   Oct 14, 2005


They live used to be so full
So alive.
I could tell who you were
By those alive eyes.

Now their empty
Dead.
Your eyes have drained off all
Hope.

Dark pits burning
Hatred & deceit.
Striped of all life you
have.

Empty eyes.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Mmmm i understood this alot actually. I mean it's short and non-telling about the own poem it's self but i understand it i believe that don't get me wrong either but to me everything was fulled with joy and then all of a sudden it went bad. that's why the eyes of memories and empty to me that's what i thought of what i got out of this poem. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

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