Where Do We Stand?

You are young, but have a great foundation to build on. Keep writing. Do not let the fire inside die. Read poetry, such as TS Elliot (Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock, Ancient Mariner, etc.) and write with your heart. Don't try to make it perfect at first blush....let your heart control the pen and get it all out....then go back and refine it. If you don't try and control the pen, don't let your ego get involved, your craft will develop quickly. You have more talent at fifteen than I did. Keep writing.

Bro I really liked this poem .. ur a good poet still .. just keep writing and all .. i'll be sure to check out more of your stuf... im sure its good... aite man .. take it ezz .. peace...

I'll tell you exactly where you stand. Britt and I had a little chat after you left today and wow, did I find out some juicy stuff. She never said that I can't tell you, so here I go trying to make things right..again.

She said that lately she have been feeling stronger emotions for you, she has been slapping herself so she wouldn't think of the chances she has with you.

I asked her would you date Anthony agan if the chnace were given?

She said....I dunno. I want to be with him, but I don't want to be tied down.

Sounds familiar Anthony? That's because you confessed the same thing to me this afternoon.

Only it was differently stated.

You guys just wanted the title and the benefits of being together, but you don't want to call it a relationship...

She's feeling the same thing you are so don't be afraid to speak to her...

How about tomorrow afterschool?

I'll even sit down with you guys if you want, I can translate for you guys. =P

Just tell me, Anthony, I read yor comment and yes. And I'll understand completely.

As for the poem, it was written very well, and I know it expresses your feelings very we too.

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