by Atomic
I'll tell you exactly where you stand. Britt and I had a little chat after you left today and wow, did I find out some juicy stuff. She never said that I can't tell you, so here I go trying to make things right..again. |
by ThugPoet
Bro I really liked this poem .. ur a good poet still .. just keep writing and all .. i'll be sure to check out more of your stuf... im sure its good... aite man .. take it ezz .. peace... |
by Bill Turner
You are young, but have a great foundation to build on. Keep writing. Do not let the fire inside die. Read poetry, such as TS Elliot (Love Song of J. Alfred Prufrock, Ancient Mariner, etc.) and write with your heart. Don't try to make it perfect at first blush....let your heart control the pen and get it all out....then go back and refine it. If you don't try and control the pen, don't let your ego get involved, your craft will develop quickly. You have more talent at fifteen than I did. Keep writing. |