Interesting poem....Seems like a poem for a trapped girl crying behind her mirrors....Welcome back...take care and keep writing....

A very interesting approach. I pictured a girl who loves to wear heavy makeup but one day just decides to take it all off and see who she truly is, and she was impressed. Loved it very much.
-A

Wow. This is amazing. I loved it. =]

"Above her head,
the broken halo revolving,
ebbing back and forth,
now no more falling."
thats my favorite stanza. the rhyme scheme throughout the entire piece was went through with such ease. it was an amazing poem