Steve,

I really felt this poem. Many times I have felt just like this. I shall take heed of your advice and take some time out to relax tonight and leave my troubles behind :)

Some of the lines you use are so profound and precise!

Thanks for such an uplifting poem, where you show you understand.

Simon

Great write Steve, but I have to disagree with you about the diagnosis...sounds like life is taking its toll. Dr. Turner recommends four margaritas, a little Jimmy Buffett, some Bob Marley followed by a little Peter Tosh, the company of a good woman and the next day in bed, more margaritas, good music and better company.....cure all the ills in the world.

Mmm....fine wine...

Great job Steve....hope you're not having hot flashes like me....mercy they're terrible...

hugs, love, Ann

Lol

Really good poem...I gotta say that when I read the tittle I thought it was a little weird, but I love it! 5/5 Nice job and keep it up my friend. Thanks for sharing.

I loved this, it reminded me soo much of my partner and I had to read it to him. we both cracked up, its so true. i remember growing up with my dad was going through the same thing...you guys really do sympathise with us hey? kind of lol...great poem a pleasure to read Steven

I love wine

That was just to cute

Yyyeeeahhhh! everybody get fat! and lazy! and wrinkly! and fat! and old! and boring! and fat! and sleepy! and fat! and fat! AND FAT! AND FAT! AND FFFFFFFFFFFFFFAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTT!!!!

* Oh, yeah and your write kicked@$$ too! i cant wait to tell kids to get off my lawn when im old (and fat) 5/5