Crying blood

by wanted dead or alive!   Oct 14, 2005


Flames of agony,
burning my soul,
my life is leaving,
i'm no longer whole,
screaming,
crying,
swallowed up by pain,
agony,
torture,
deserted again,
the sharp sting of reality,
piercing the numb ache of my heart,
abandoned by you,
im falling apart,
caught up in frustration
swept away by confusion,
hope has faded away
love was just an illusion,
the sick and twisted images
of death are creeping into my mind,
the empty torment of you leaving me behind,
i know i cant go on,
my fragile heart has gone,
shattered into pieces,
tell me what i did wrong
those fatal words you spoke,
caused me so much greif,
broken trust,
broken hearts,
this is my only relief,
desperation takes over,
calling out to anybody there
my life is fading
does anybody care?
the knife cuts me deep,
just as i knew it would,
im laying here weak on the floor,
empty eyes crying blood.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jenna

    Great Job! I love it! I can feel the depression and hated! it makes me squee with emotions lol! PROPS!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah

    Probably the best poem i've read in weeks. bravo.. xox leah

  • 19 years ago

    by Sourav

    This so sad! But must say it's a wonderful poem! Love it! Great job!

  • 19 years ago

    by morbid_tears

    Amazing poem. I loved it!! I really relate to it with what has been going on in my life lately. Never stop writing..5/5
    ~*Amber*~

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    This is such a great poem! i love it! i can totally relate! life can be so f u k i n hard but don't give up! it will work out, it usually does, u just need to hold on coz things are always going to go wrong but thats just the way life goes, but i no that if you look inside yourself you will find that you are strong and can make it thru! thanx so much 4 ur comment i really appreciated it! 5/5 hun keep up the great work! if u need someone im here

    luv Maddy xxx

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