Comments : That pretty girl

  • 19 years ago

    by Mona

    Beautiful..im speechless

  • 19 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    Great poem. the last line is very effectivexxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Soooo sad. a gorgeous poem that could be so true in many schools.... i'll look closer at the "pretty people" from now on....

  • 19 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    You're right ruby,
    looks mean nothing.
    great work!!! it's really well written

    sammi
    P.S GO AUSSIES!!!
    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    This poem is awesomely written! Thanks for commenting on mine :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashton

    Damn you are good at writing i wsh i was that good. well am commenting to tell you that this poem is a 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww dis was so sad.. but i luved it lol
    kep it up kk n take care
    mwa xoxoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Jessica

    I loved it

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Omg that gurl is like me! no1 knos that i am like the way i am..but they dun kno me...neway FABULOUS poem! wow...5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Wow.. that was short, bas very powerful i loved every word in it.. i lyk how u found under every something to talk about... gr8 stuff.. i reli lyk ur last stanza and the last line in particular
    gr8 job
    Nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Wow, This is a diffrent look on things.
    I really liked it, for once its from a diffrent persons eyes.. well done.. I hope this girl finds your smile and can stay stong.
    You made the poem great without a steady flow which is hard well done xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    I absolutly love your poems...and i have no spaces left in my fav's list but i'm gonna create a spot for you....this one kinda describes me in a way....im not the prettiest...but i'v had ppl say i was...and no1 really understands the feelings i have inside....mostly b/c i dont want them to see

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wonderful poem. It has a lot of meaning to it and the poem has a lot of emotion in it.

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Wow..this is really good 5/5 keep it up
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Thank you for pointing out that people may be feeling different on the inside. As a girl who has suffered from anorexia, I am used to being judged by people when they see my outter self. =) Well written and expressed!! =P

  • 18 years ago

    by GemmaR

    Fantastic poem- extremely well written. i'm off to read the rest of your poems now!

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    I can really relate to this one.
    I love it how you define everything into a simple way that's easy to understand.
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sango

    Very Sad, is all i can say..

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    I wanted to say thanks, and that this poem is excellent. its very rare that you find a poem that doesn't rhyme, and is still amazingly wonderful!

  • 18 years ago

    by pain is me

    I LOVE this!!!!!!
    i can really relate to this
    i am the girl who everyone thinks they know so well, while they really dont kno me at all...
    xxxx
    abby