by Mona
Beautiful..im speechless |
Great poem. the last line is very effectivexxx |
Soooo sad. a gorgeous poem that could be so true in many schools.... i'll look closer at the "pretty people" from now on.... |
by SammiBABY
You're right ruby, |
by Amanda
This poem is awesomely written! Thanks for commenting on mine :) |
by Ashton
Damn you are good at writing i wsh i was that good. well am commenting to tell you that this poem is a 5/5 |
by nadsyy
Aww dis was so sad.. but i luved it lol |
by Jessica
I loved it |
Omg that gurl is like me! no1 knos that i am like the way i am..but they dun kno me...neway FABULOUS poem! wow...5/5! |
by NannO
Wow.. that was short, bas very powerful i loved every word in it.. i lyk how u found under every something to talk about... gr8 stuff.. i reli lyk ur last stanza and the last line in particular |
by ASPHYXIATED
Wow, This is a diffrent look on things. |
I absolutly love your poems...and i have no spaces left in my fav's list but i'm gonna create a spot for you....this one kinda describes me in a way....im not the prettiest...but i'v had ppl say i was...and no1 really understands the feelings i have inside....mostly b/c i dont want them to see |
by Little Dot
Wonderful poem. It has a lot of meaning to it and the poem has a lot of emotion in it. |
by .
Wow..this is really good 5/5 keep it up |
by Tess
Thank you for pointing out that people may be feeling different on the inside. As a girl who has suffered from anorexia, I am used to being judged by people when they see my outter self. =) Well written and expressed!! =P |
by GemmaR
Fantastic poem- extremely well written. i'm off to read the rest of your poems now! |
by avery
I can really relate to this one. |
by Sango
Very Sad, is all i can say.. |
I wanted to say thanks, and that this poem is excellent. its very rare that you find a poem that doesn't rhyme, and is still amazingly wonderful! |
by pain is me
I LOVE this!!!!!! |