When I look in the mirror

by The Poet Behind The Poems   Oct 14, 2005


When I look in the mirror do you no what I see
I see a lad of broken hearts that needs to be set free
Im a prisoner of my own love, I can see tears in my eyes
I no I cant have her but I love her loads dont be surprised
Shes the most beautifully girl ive ever seen
I didnt think a girl like this excised, only in dreams
Shes with someone else who treats her bad
She comes to me for advice and it makes me so sad
How can anyone treat her like this, I wish I could take her away
But how can I do this if all she wants is to stay
I gave her advice I said no man is worth the tears you cry
But she said you dont know how hard it is to say goodbye
When I look in the mirror this is what I want to see
A smile on my face, a beat in my heart and her next to me

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  • 18 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    I think this is my favorite one, you did a great job writting this poem. 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~*Curious Me*~

    This is a really sweet poem. I kinda feel this way about my ex boyfriend but he doesnt come to me for advice. hes with a person that cant love him like i can. 5/5 keep up the great work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Perfect Failure

    Awwwww

    hehe i like all ur stuff!

    keep writeing

    Renee
    xoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Hey i 4got to give u a hug *huggles* hehe

  • 19 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Aww dis is so sad it made em cry lol....it really drawn me in as wel..gwd work keep it up
    mwa xoxox

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