I really liked this poem....."Im a prisoner of my own love, I can see tears in my eyes".....nice metaphor. I actually thought that the person in the mirror was you, then I found out its a guy!. i also like the last sentence, it was really good. Keep up the good work. 5/5

Hey love your poem, it is sooooo good

Nice poem, great job!!!

Aww dis is so sad it made em cry lol....it really drawn me in as wel..gwd work keep it up
mwa xoxox

Hey i 4got to give u a hug *huggles* hehe

Awwwww

hehe i like all ur stuff!

keep writeing

Renee
xoxo

This is a really sweet poem. I kinda feel this way about my ex boyfriend but he doesnt come to me for advice. hes with a person that cant love him like i can. 5/5 keep up the great work.

I think this is my favorite one, you did a great job writting this poem. 5/5