The Lights Were So Bright

by Truest Lies   Oct 14, 2005


The lights were so bright,
They hurt my eyes.
For a minute I had the sensation,
That I was floating in a sea of faces,
All looking polite,
Some quite contrite,
Waiting for me to dance.

The music began,
The passion to flow,
Now this is just me and you now.
I tried to lock out the stares,
To concentrate on the rhythm.
I tried to show them all,
I knew how to dance.

But that was all,
Soon over
And I went back to my corner,
Ashamed at my performance,
Glad that it was over,
Knowing that tomorrow,
Ill be up on that stage again.

I dont care that much if they clap,
Although I love the applause,
I know that Im doing my best,
I know that I have time,
I know that I have the heart.
I know that this is only the start.

*Just a little poem about one really bad performance I had a little while ago. -I hope that you liked this even though it didnt rhyme very much..

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  • 19 years ago

    by Jamie

    I liked this alot the sea of faces was an amazing way to describe the audience great job 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    It was really good, and I can relate, because something similar happened to me at one of my recitals a couple years ago. I really liked the poem and my fav. lines were:

    "I know that Im doing my best,
    I know that I have time,
    I know that I have the heart.
    I know that this is only the start."

    They were great, along with the rest of the poem. Good job!
    Love always,
    ~BJ~

  • 19 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Yippee! I

  • I liked this, it's very personal and i always think that works really well.

    xxx cici xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    I liked it, and I can relate too. When I perform on stage.. It's just really bad. I can't dance, so I don't, I just sing.. Even if I can't.. lol, well, nice job even if it didn't rhyme, some of mine don't either. 5/5