Very Well Done!!!

I love this poem. i gave it 5/5 keep it up i would love to hear more from you

Wow! thats really good. whoever you were writing about really missed out, because anyone who can write like that must be amazing. keep it up:)

ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS POEM. you are definitly going onto my favorites. I love the rhyming patterns, and I love the idea of this poem. I hope everything gets better for you. 5/5

Beautiful poem, filled with alot of emotion.

Excellent poem. i really loved it. how you described what you know a home isn't, then went into what you knew it was... i don't know... it's kinda hard to explain. anyways, 5/5, keep up the good work.
**lisa**

Awww this is very sad but yet another amazing poem. I really liked this because at the beginning it shows us what you learned about a house and you thought it was going to turn out a fairy tale poem but then you realized that nothing is a fairy tale in real life. I really like this poem alot. very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Great job.

Wow i luv this poem sad yet amazing! this had so much emmotion! i luvd it..u might've gotten at least runner up with this poem...oh well better luck next time! 5/5 4 sure!
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