Comments : I will be there..

  • 19 years ago

    by Anthony

    Wow this seemed to me like a really heartfelt and emotional poem. My favorite lines were:

    "I am nowhere near perfect, I have so much to learn
    But I love you, I am devoted to you, with every part of my soul
    I found laughter and happiness with you my love
    I found the missing piece of me, the part to make me whole"

    Again, Awesome poem. 5/5

    ~Anthony

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    "As each blade of grass adores the morning dew"

    beautiful line! wonderful poem! brightens up a day, it surely does!

    ~Jacklyn

    sorry for the short comment just got to finish this paper by tomarro and have barely started!

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    Very emotional poem.
    'I cannot take your burden, But I can hold you above it'
    I loved this line.
    The poem doesn't have the best rhythm, but this doesn't seem to matter. The emotion and care is the most important part of this. And overall it is well written.

  • This is sooo beautiful...not a lot of ppl write quite like u...very good...
    kisses

  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Wonderfully amazing! It was just beautiful, Katie, great job. 5/5

    Saiya

  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Oh and by the way this is forever Saiya, just a new name

  • 19 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful poem of love, lovely!!!