I Believed

by ShadowedPhoenix   Oct 14, 2005


I never wanted to have all of this to say,
I always believed you loved me and that you'd stay!
I never wanted it to ends like this, so resentfully,
I believed when this had occurred I'd have prepared myself mentally!

I saw the life I wanted in your eyes,
I always believed what we had was real, but it was lies!
I saw the part of you that I wanted to belong to me,
I believed the love we had would set us free!

I watched your heart shrink and grow,
I always believed that soon your love for me would show!
I watched as you watched my world fall apart,
I believed you'd heal me but you're the one that broke my heart....

I fought for sanity in a time of such hate,
I knew God could save me, it's never too late.
I fought for freedom, myself and my pride,
I know now without that eventually i would have died!

I believed in everything, I believed in you,
I believed our love wouldn't fade, that it would continue!
I Believed in nothing w=else but you love and trust....
But most importantly I Believed in US!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Pauly D.

    Astounding again, shadowed. You've got impeccable talent, and a good nack for making me on the verge of tears...thanks, shadowed.

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding Mascara

    Hey I like ur display pic in your profile u look cute, I also like hopw u put a comma in the middle ofsome of your lines. it makes it easier on the eyes. Ur poems have a twist and i like them cos at the begginig it sounds alright and u wana keep reading then towards the end u think its not going anywhere then at the end u come up with the perfect grasping ending.

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Excellent poem! I'm very glad to have gotten to see some of your work, you have a way of showing feelings of the heart and you make it seem so easy! I love the last two lines, Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by CE

    I like this poem, but should it go under something like lost love or something?

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Awwww....This is a terrific poem . You have me in tears right now, I'm overly sensitive, can't help it ...I wish I could rate you higher then a five, because I would . This truly is wonderful, poetry must run through your vains...keep up the good work...love ya..5/5

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