Wow hun this poem was amazing and heart felt you did a really good job take care xox

Great poem. well writtenm effective structure and expressive

Awwww....This is a terrific poem . You have me in tears right now, I'm overly sensitive, can't help it ...I wish I could rate you higher then a five, because I would . This truly is wonderful, poetry must run through your vains...keep up the good work...love ya..5/5

I like this poem, but should it go under something like lost love or something?

Excellent poem! I'm very glad to have gotten to see some of your work, you have a way of showing feelings of the heart and you make it seem so easy! I love the last two lines, Well done!

Hey I like ur display pic in your profile u look cute, I also like hopw u put a comma in the middle ofsome of your lines. it makes it easier on the eyes. Ur poems have a twist and i like them cos at the begginig it sounds alright and u wana keep reading then towards the end u think its not going anywhere then at the end u come up with the perfect grasping ending.

Astounding again, shadowed. You've got impeccable talent, and a good nack for making me on the verge of tears...thanks, shadowed.