It's pretty nice, I like it.
One thing;
"All the girls the I'm pretty," I think you ment "All the girls think I'm pretty" but no big deal, I always notice things like that heh...
Thanks for your comments by the way. :)

This was good the form was good i liked the flow of everything the concept was great an overused idea but you made it your own for sure great poem 5/5

This is a good one, and it's really true...happens all the time.

Awwl.. very cute poem.. I liked it alot.. i hope in the end he noticed you..because if you did all that for him and he didnt even notice he doesnt deserve you.. anyways good luck and i liked the poem 5/5. xox

Great poem. I liked the message of “I don’t care what anyone else thinks, only what you think.” The last line was an example of forced rhyme. “Is a thought I'm willing to dare,” doesn’t make any sense with the rest of the poem. I see you’ve paid a lot of attention to looks and although the main message is “noticing you” maybe a bit more on the noticing personality front would make the poem sound a little more modest. I think you formatted the poem well and kept the poem relevant with out repeating yourself which many people do, so well done.
Overall good job, keep it up!

Great poem I love every line
and I hope that the guy you are talking about notices you soon.
-Leona

That was so sweet.. i lykd wat u wanted to say, and u chose ur words well.. ur rhyme wasnt bad.. but it didnt reli move me, so ill give it a 4
take care
Nannoush

If he hasnt and doesnt notice you soon his not worth it.
great pom very well written again the last lines not the best but the rest is great.

Liked dis a lot hun xxx

This is a good poem.. a nice confidence booster :)

Very well expressed. Thanks for sharing. :o) 5/5!

Michelle

Like this one also.
very creative and how you want him to be yours but he doesn't see you. This is a true poem to others also. Very nice. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Wonderfully written. Great rhyme scheme. All your other poem are just a tad bit lower on the scale with this one. It's just me but I'm not very fond of the AABB rhyme scheme.

Your ABCB rhyme scheme is pretty much the best scheme your poems have. (in sylabble wise)

Well done. I relate to what you're saying. 5/5

Your from Indiana..nice my grandpa lives there...anyway..hit me back nice work

Pretty good, try to keep a consistant flow. keep it up

Aww very cute... You shouldn't try to impress some guy though. He should like you for you.. Great poem and it's full of emotion. I hope everything worked out for you.. Keep it up hun...

Wow, I thought that was really good. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

ACE!!!!!!!
So true its weird.

Hey! Yes, somehow it seems to be the opposite.. you're lucky he likes you... wonderful poem, well thought through, hope you'll take the chance and show him what a girl wants... the guy I sort of liked hates me because I'm too lively... *shrugs*