by LadyPearl Oct 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tears stream down my face |
by Jason Meres
I love your passion, and your descriptions, rhyme scheme is well intact. |
by BloodScars
Wow.....O_O 5/5 |
by x Saiya
I loved it! The ending; that last stanza was just perfect. =) Great job and thanks for looking at my poems--I appreciate the advice |
by Atomic
Splendid job M'Dear. The whole poem seemed pretty good, but it was the ;ast stanza that took my breath away. =) |