Comments : Family Portrait

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Splendid job M'Dear. The whole poem seemed pretty good, but it was the ;ast stanza that took my breath away. =)

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 19 years ago

    by x Saiya

    I loved it! The ending; that last stanza was just perfect. =) Great job and thanks for looking at my poems--I appreciate the advice

  • 19 years ago

    by BloodScars

    Wow.....O_O 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    I love your passion, and your descriptions, rhyme scheme is well intact.