The way it can go.

by Bluey!   Oct 14, 2005


My mother tucked me in that night
Kissed my head and turned out the light.
She smiled at me and wished me sweetdreams.
I later woke up, when I heard her screams.
I heard a ruckus, some sort of fight.
I walked up and turned on the light.
I saw him there, big and strong.
Hitting my mother, with his belt so long.
Mother screamed and cried, I ran to hide.
Father was angry, best stay away.
Suddenly quiet, did he go his way?
I snuk up and peeked, shaking my head.
I could'nt believe it, my mother was dead.

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  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Omg.. thats so harsh and cruel.. i liked the way u presented the idea in a story-like fashion.. loved the rhyme and the flow was almost perfect.. i reli liked the beginning.. im not a big fan of these things, but u had something to say and we shud all be alarmed to abuse.. and u said it well and efficiently.. gr8 job

    take good care
    NannO

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Hard hitting well written dark poem

    perfect flow

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Oh my! that was very very sad, i can't believe the world has so much sadness within it, i thought god wanted us to be happy?
    overall, the poem was magnificent, keep writing
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Very sad poem. It's horrible how things like this happen every day.

  • 19 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Great poem. No errors, subtle and to the point, and the flow was real good. 5/5 once again.

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