Very nice and very sad 5/5

Speachless really good i like it

Speachless really good i like it

Oh..my.. Wow, that's so sad..
5/5 Very well-written, keep it up!

God Bless
Saiya

Great poem. No errors, subtle and to the point, and the flow was real good. 5/5 once again.

Very sad poem. It's horrible how things like this happen every day.

Oh my! that was very very sad, i can't believe the world has so much sadness within it, i thought god wanted us to be happy?
overall, the poem was magnificent, keep writing
xxxxxxx

Hard hitting well written dark poem

perfect flow

Omg.. thats so harsh and cruel.. i liked the way u presented the idea in a story-like fashion.. loved the rhyme and the flow was almost perfect.. i reli liked the beginning.. im not a big fan of these things, but u had something to say and we shud all be alarmed to abuse.. and u said it well and efficiently.. gr8 job

take good care
NannO