Other good one and again good use of emotion, sounds like a serious poem. A sad one but serious and very good. Keep it up
Juls

NIIIIIICEEEEE!!! Look at my poems.... Note: They're gay :D

Nicely Done,
The emotion was ace, ah the fake smiles and maskes we all use to hide the true intent of out pain and love, a motif and symbol used often as a mirror yet never gets old, Well done, chin up, you have years ahead of you yet m'dear, I promise good ones

D.A

I agree with DA; you don't need to worry. You've still got time to do what you wished and couldn't and...well, just to live in the moment...as do all of us, for that matter... We all DO leave at some point, but that doesn't mean we should be too eager to be first to do it...Anyways, it's still a great poem with a powerful and thoughtful message...made me stop and think. Thanks for commenting!

I'm not trying to preach, by the way...I hope my last comment didn't sound like I was...anyways...

This poem was simple, but very good at them same time

Awesome poem .... and no i dont slit my wrist ( anymore ) ... thanks for the comments