Awwww i love this one theeeee veryyyy bestest. omg this is beautifullllll i loveeeee it.

Do you have an AIM or AOL screenname??? coz i put this in my profile. =] message me back please. -carrie

Awwwww, that's a VERY GOOD poem! So sweet... and sad... :( I'm sorry. Guys can be mean sometimes. I hope you find a man some day that will love you forever and a day! I really loved this poem, hun! My favorite stanza was:

"But one night all that changed
Even your voice over the phone
You left me broken in the agony
Of an endless dial tone"

It was very good! You are a wonderful poet! Keep up the great writing! I look forward to reading more of your work!

Love always,
~BJ~

I like this poem its sad and reminds me of my first love thats not a good thing but this poem is good you have a lot f emotions to express like me! lol w/b

Gurley...i totally kno how you feel bc this past september, i went thru the exact same experience...supposedly he was moving away....but i think now, it was otherwise...he left me the same way and he opened me up from the start...you'll find another....i'm so sry

Wow, i love this poem! 5/5