Wow! very good. i like how you put it and your wording. very different and unique(sp?)

I think the poem was wonderful, but I think you could have gone on without the cheesy title. Take off the "baby" part and I'll hear it even more.

"I have a bullet here engraved just for you.

"Load it in your gun and I'll tell you what to do."

That's my favourite part.

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