Hearts And Hands

I feel exactly the same way

the guy i called my best friend broke my heart
nd i tell him im over it nd im ok, wen its obvious im not

but i still act like a friend to him just to be nice, but he really doesnt deserve it

great poem!!

xxxx

Wow, this poem was really strong. the last line was very effective. good job!

Okay so i love you for commenting me xamillion times. god i wish this wasnt just an internet friendship. you dont have a xanga or myspace by anychance do you? well you dont have it available to send u an email so ill leave another comment. yeah so youre amazing and i hope everything is goin well for you, if you ever need someone to talk to jasp1291@yahoo.com email me. coz id like to know specifics about this guy u likkkee =]
for me its kinda complicated.
i dated this guy and dumped him coz i liked some other guy. and now i like the 1st guy again. and he doesnt like me. but ill get over it. =] talk to you soon!

Aw this is really good. i love the way it flows and i can tell its straight from your heart.

THIS POEM IS SO INCREDIBLE!
i really enjoyed reading it, its written so beautifully! you clearly have amazing talent. i especially like the last two lines