Hiya just read your poem that was frickin awsome hope to read some more soon 5/5 Heather

Aw this reminds me of what a friend of mine is going through. this is very verryyyyyyyyy goood. loveloveloveit.

This is also a very good poem! You are a good poet, Erica! Good job! I really liked the flow and the rhyme! My favorite stanza was:

"Tear streaks cover both her cheeks as she remembers what you were...
a pounding heart and shaking hands you did this to her..."

It's a nice way to start this poem! Good job :D Keep up the good work!

Love always,
~BJ~

THIS POEM IS SO INCREDIBLE!
i really enjoyed reading it, its written so beautifully! you clearly have amazing talent. i especially like the last two lines

Aw this is really good. i love the way it flows and i can tell its straight from your heart.

Okay so i love you for commenting me xamillion times. god i wish this wasnt just an internet friendship. you dont have a xanga or myspace by anychance do you? well you dont have it available to send u an email so ill leave another comment. yeah so youre amazing and i hope everything is goin well for you, if you ever need someone to talk to jasp1291@yahoo.com email me. coz id like to know specifics about this guy u likkkee =]
for me its kinda complicated.
i dated this guy and dumped him coz i liked some other guy. and now i like the 1st guy again. and he doesnt like me. but ill get over it. =] talk to you soon!

Wow, this poem was really strong. the last line was very effective. good job!

I feel exactly the same way

the guy i called my best friend broke my heart
nd i tell him im over it nd im ok, wen its obvious im not

but i still act like a friend to him just to be nice, but he really doesnt deserve it

great poem!!

xxxx