Hey,its very good!!

I love it!! its good keep writing u r very good at it.
Juls 5/5

Really good, I get what u mean, im not in exactly da same situation but some parts of it relate to me. Really good poem 5/5

Hey good poem, u expressed it reallly good, keep up tha work hun xoxoxox

This one is good too..quite sad but good...and i can relate to some of the lines...Great...Joc

Im rly sorry. after the first 3 stnzas i was lyk 'she's lyk me!' now i see u hv it worse and i hope things get better 4 u. brilliant poem.
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Sweet im inlove with ur work

Dean xoxox

Great expression in this poem. Good work. Keep it up!

Its good u no its good when u can feal what the writer is saying and i sure did we all get diffrent meassages but i think i can really relate

AWW I LIEK A LOT OF UR POEMS WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE BUT I HAVE TO GO .. NICE THO.. KEEP IT UP.. BYENESS

The wording isa bit confusing, but i like it. nice

I dont like how you say God has put her through hell. that somewhat ruined the poem for me.

I wish no one had to fight with close friends, or family. i just wish this didn't happen to anyone.

sigh. you wrote a great poem. no more i can say.

5/5 David

Very good poem i liked it better than the other 2 and i can relate with the grandma getting cancer for my one grandma just survived colon cancer and my other grandma was just diagnosed with breast cancer so i can relate with that, very well written great job 5/5

Nice poem! Keep 'em coming!

I know exactly how you feel with ALL of that actually. wow that is so good. amazing writer