Wow, Vic. That was an AMAZING poem! I really felt the emotion in it! Wow. Good job, hun... one thing I did notice:

"your oice repeats its self a thousand times ..a thousand heartbreaks a thousand lies"

I think you mean voice* instead of oice...

Other than that, it was beautiful! I loved the entire poem!!!!!!!

"I sit here crying myself to sleep
my heart is hurting with every beat
i hear a voice as i lay here wishing i was dead
another voice of u inside my head"

That was my favorite stanza! Good job hun 5/5 for sure!
Love always,
~BJ~

Thats a gud poem Vic. keep up the work. Huggles and Kises too u ma friend. much love. R

That was a really good one. I know exactly how you feel with this one. Again it was a good one

Very good poem.You are really gifted.Hope to read more.

I LOVEYOU

That made me sooo sad. that was a great poem though. i loved it just like i love you.