Ooh i like this...as i was reading it i pictured it coming from a small, far off voice.....
very good....i love it as always!
hugs and kisses and HOPE for the white dwarfs!
*rachel

Hey darling! nice poem! 5/5 i'm sorry, but you do seem to be using a lot of earth science terms in ur poems latley. *giggle* that's not a bad thing!
lots of love!

Hello. thank you so much for your comment, i really apppreciate it. ...wow... this poem is really good, i love it. >>>>>5... keep it up