You showed your love and despair here... very special.

Good Writing!
beth

I REALLY UNDERSTOOD THIS ONE. MY BABY WOULD RATHER SMOKE WEED THAN DO ANYTHING WITH ME

Wow.... this is absolutely amazing!!!!

"I'm losing my unfought battle
As you win your victory"

very deep... i really hope things get better for the two of you. stay strong and take care,
-xXx-

Excellent travis !! u did it again...
the story is a sad one...filled with pain...& soaked in tears... its touching...comes from the heart...
harldy any rhyme but that doesnt matter cuz u get the msg across !!
loved it
love
amy

I felt the emotion. i really hope she doesn't do it. It's not good i hate when people do it. I mean yeah i'm friends with them but it's just not right for me i guess. i hope she's gonna be okay. keep your head up. Everything will be okay. amazing job once again. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

That's sad.. I thought it was good though. =) The flow and everything were alright, Was a little shaky in some areas. But it was still good. 5/5

`Taleee. xx.