Great poem, moving and deep! Just in one paragraph you write I picked up and already used blade* Shouldn't it be an already used blade!
*x*ShadowedPhoenix*x*

Loved every part of it, it was brill. Thanx for ur comment by the way :-) take care x

Aww this is a sad poem but its nice how u wrote it. im sorry for how u feel but i really hope u feel better. well, keep up the great writing.